Ok,I use to have a pretty good flow of bars until it got deleted so I rebuilt it with a few lines on what I could remember and have a better version. Here it is ladies and fags, 100% Original Content.
A Score of Splints and Tourniquettes Aren't Enough to End This Laughing
Enormous Whips Flip Back and Hit, Enlighten Me Through Lashings
In This Hell this Infidel's Advancing; A Batch of Rap Contraptions
Abstract Facts in Stacks React, Leave you Sick like Pathogens
You'll Lose Your Voice like Mannequins, From Re-Enacted Fists
A Bringer of Eclipse, a Blasted Bastard Masochist
A Master Advocate, That Spits In Arrays of Disgust
I'm Settlin Messes in a Way that's Unjust
I'll be Settin Up Hexes With Arabian Blood
And I'm Back with a Flood of Words and Blurred Lips
In a Spur of Wits, This Hearse Emits Smoke
This Current Gets Your Chin Broke, So Tell Me What Ya Steeze Is?
Your Only Good Flow is When you Feed off Mine like Leeches
So I'll be like Species, and Release Diseases
I Need I.V.'s, Indeed I Beseech This
Because I Flow so, I Run Low on These Liquids
Well, let's see some feedback.
Dopeness, I liked it. I'm more audio so it was hard for me to find a flow, but it was good.
Some of the better stuff ive read here in a while...(Not sure if you want advise)
But when im dissing somone, or talking shit in a rap i found it easier to be more verstile with it if you simplify your rhymes...Thats just my opinion though..
Keep elevating man..
Thanks to everyone who posted. I haven't rap battled anyone in a long long time so I'm not really in sync with battle rap formation right now. But it was mainly just a verse to flex some word skills.