I never was one to hold a fuckin grudge,
wiped it out my memory, like a fuckin smudge,
but this time its different,
i cant help but think of it...
as my fault, yet its not my fault
so its just a fuckin insult,
a smack in the face,
its worse in taste,
I'd kill that mother fucker,
but its not my place to judge his ass,
but i wont stop till hes burnin...at last...

ya think ya got me,
you dont know me; thats what i said son,
you messed up this time,
now i got you trippin on the run...

Ya stole something from me,
I'd like it back,
with my fist to ya teeth, and how about that...
but its partially pride son,
but mostly the fact ya got out of that
///and can say you got some...(*IMgrittinMYteeth*>.<
Yeah, so ya got away...
ya think no one can stop you but now ya must pay,
So fuck all the bullshit,
step on up and get ya fuckin neck slit

ya think ya got me,
you dont know me; thats what i said son,
you messed up this time,
now i got you trippin on the run...

(its a matter of my life, and nothings really done,
ya think ya got away with it this time,
no more fun,
When i find you i will get you
and my deed is done, till then ya caught all on the run)

ya think ya got me,
you dont know me thats what i said son,
you messed up this time,
now i got you trippin on the run...

seems to be a reoccurring subject in your poems. Not trying to mock you, I mean like a literal event you keep referring to.

indeed...life gives you lemons, squirt it in lifes eyes...lol, yeah, i feel ya, sry bout that, it was my creative point

yeah its whatever man, just like a break from the same shit ya know. I write alot of poetry myself and most every one has something different in it.

i feel ya, just my way of taking out what i've kept, cause i couldnt take it out on...well, him...ya feel me? but i'll work on new,

yeah I understand, just critiquing it from a reader's perspective, if this was all a compilation it would be the same shit over and over, there all fine as individual poems.

i appreciate all criticism, so no prob, nothin but respect

Its pretty good man. Seems like you're really letting out some pent up anger and shit. But like T.N. said, branch out a little. It'll probably be just as good.